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My school is very beautiful. It is in Beijing Dongcheng District. It is beside in forbidden city. My school is No.6 Middle School. My school has a large playground. There are grass in the playground. After we finished our class, we always play football on the playgound. There is a building at the west of the playground. It is a teach buiding. Our classroom is at the third floor of the building. The labs are at the north of the playgound. Everyday, we arrive at the school at 7 o'clock in the morning. Then we go home at 17 o'clolck in the afternoon. My school has many teachers. They are all kind to us.