正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;行文流畅,但衔接词比较少。
My school is very beautiful. It is in Beijing Dongcheng District. It is beside in the forbidden city. My school is No.6 Middle School. My school has a large playground. There are grass in the playground. After we finished our class, we always play football on the playground. There is a building at the west of the playground. It is a teaching building. Our classroom is at the third floor of the building. The labs are at the north of the playground. Every day, we arrive at the school at 7 a.m. Then we go home at 5 p.m. My school has many teachers. They are all kind to us.