小学一年级英语作文:My dog

简单句型过多，从句使用不熟练；文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；层次分明，但过渡词欠缺。

There is a dog in my family. We call it "Dudu" . It is very fat and white. This year it is nine old. My aunt gave me the dog as a birthday present when I was six. In morning, Dudu calls me wake up at half past six o'clock. In evening I play with the dog every day in the garden after I finish my homework. It is my good friend and I love it very much.