小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

句式多变，多多练习从句的使用；单词拼写做的不错，文中词汇表达贫乏；结构良好，但是语言不流畅。

I have a great colleague, She is a pretty woman, She has a long black hair, two not too big eyes and red mouth, Her voices is better, She is a clever girl. I have a great colleague, she is a pretty woman, she has a long black hair, two not too big eyes and red mouth, Her voices is better, She's a clever girl.