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Dear Judy, I am willing to convey my heartfelt thanks to you for your warm reception when I participated in the exchange program in your country. Your generous help made it possible for me to have a very pleasant stay and a chance to know American culture better.Besides,I think it is a great honor for me to make friends with you and I will cherish the goodwill you showed to me wherever I go.I do hope that you will visit China one day,so that I could have the opportunity to repay your kindness and refresh our friendship. I feel obliged to thank you again. Yours sincerely, Zhang Wei
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