文中从句数量不足;单词拼写做的不错,文中词汇表达贫乏;结构良好,但是语言不流畅。
I have a great colleague, She is a pretty woman, She has long black hairs, two not too big eyes and red mouth, her voices are better, She is a clever girl. I have a great colleague, she is a pretty woman, she has long black hairs, two not too big eyes and red mouth, her voices are better, She's a clever girl.