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高级词汇使用比较准确，但文中拼写错误稍多；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用；句法知识较好，但需加强句式变化。
Tourism bring harm to the envoroment With the thriving of society, tourism is playing a significant role in our lives. Some people think that too many tourism may affect the enviroment, while, others against this view.Nevertheless,from my perspective, overdevelopment tourism may have negtive effect to our environment. the reasons are below,initially, with the convienent of travel agency, people go aboard are even increasing.some people left so many rubbish in the beaches, such as ,white plastic bag which is hard to decompose,it will destory the ecosystem. Furtherly, with the increasing of living standard, people travel by private vehicles. The gases vehicles emits are the major polutant to the global warming. Ultimately, for meet the need of people, too many places are cultivated to be interestes spots, to some extent, it may disorder the living habits of wilanimals. put some animal in danger. In conclusion, overdevelop tourism is harm to our environment, thus, we should pay more attention about it.
