文章层次较为清晰;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练,单词拼写方面要更仔细。
It is common that people believe what they see and listen,which is unbilliant.People used to get a conclusion at one.However,what they believe maybe not true. there are examples to illustrate about it.A new about a student and an elder that it show us the student made the elder fall down.Many people would make a conclusion that the student was fault.However,In the following day,another news showed that the elder fell down and the student helped him.Obviousiy,most of us feel unbelievable,because what we saw yesterday seems right,and we all made a bad conclusion.Therefore,we couldnot make a conclusion untill we learn about it comprehensively. As fas as I am concerned,It is important for us to have a clear thinking,which maybe impacts others in the daily life.Only with compele learning can we make a true conclusion.
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