2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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With the development of social,nowdays online shopping is aready become a fashion, this is a social phenomenon .the number of people like to use internet to go shopping,because the online shopping is convinient than tradition way,and it can spend a little time to do it except the net have a kind of thing you can choose when you need ,it can save a number of time to do other ,although online shopping have many benefit to our life,also including many questions, In my opinion,if you are go to shopping in the store of the stree,the most of things you can see locate in youself mood and so forth.