2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

熟练的使用了从句和复杂句；语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者词汇表达比较多样，也能较好的使用一些高级词汇。

With the development of social,nowdays online shopping is already become a fashion, this is a social phenomenon .the number of people like to use internet to go shopping,because the online shopping is convenient than tradition way,and it can spend a little time to shopping it except the net have a kind of thing you can choose when you need ,it can save a number of times to do other ,although online shopping have many benefit to our life,also including many questions, In my opinion,if you are go to shopping in the store of the stree,the most of things you can see locate in yourself mood and so forth.