小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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my name is susan i have a good friend .she is twenty seven years old . but she stial is sigle woman i really holp she will find her ture love as soonas possable she like plan flower .i love her thanks my name is susan i have a good friend .she is twenty seven years old . but she stial is sigle woman i really holp she will find her ture love as soonas possable she like plan flower .i love her thanks