字数:200满分:100分
采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;用词灵活多样,也能较灵活地使用一些高级词汇;可适当增加复合句和从句的使用。
As we can see from the vividly picture: the young man writes the word "Beckham," the superstar of the English football team, on his face. Meanwhile, the other person is spending 300 yuan to make a hair analogous to the Beckham hair style. What a ridiculous phenomenon it is! What on earth let they do this crazy behavior? Actually, this is a universal social pattern: more and more youngsters show their appreciation to super stars by intimating the physical appearance as well as doing unusual things, such as tracing the singer private life at all costs. There are some reasonable explanations about this. On the one hand, it is reflected the willing of youngsters who are strongly becoming an excellent person. On the other hand, they want to identify with their companions by doing this likewise. In my opinion, it has the likelihood to be a better thing in light of junior generation. The influence of celebrities, who always have a great spiritual world, can drive the young study hard if they are not only learning the outside appearance of the star but also the inside character of the famous person. The pursuit of idol is a double sword, good or bad, depends on how you use to it.