托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第49篇:坚持不懈是否能让人变得更加强壮

Perseverance means that a person could do something hard in a long period of time to get through problems and reach his goal. To approach success or become stronger, we need both excellent tutors and scientific methods. Only perseverance could not make people stronger. To find one's soul mate is the first example. If the girl who your court is not fond of you, or you have little information about her, only perseverance would not make you success. It is the same situation for excerse, if you want to lose your weight but follow a muscle-build method, then you will fail despite how persevere you are. Different purples need different corresponding methods, to get more musle or to lose weight are totally different. So, compared to perseverance, goals and approaches are more important to become stronger. But if you have correct purples and methods, then perseverance become the most important factor for you to become stronger. Any outstanding athlets or scientists, must spend much more time and perspiration than normal people to success. For them, perseverance is the same important as an excellent tutor. So, in my thinking, only perseverance would not make people stronger. But after combining with brilliant tutor and correct method, perseverance will become the most important factor to determine whether a person will success or become stronger.