文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,高级词汇使用稍显不足;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。
Mary Chen: I am sorry about that i have to go out to work for a week in Beijing so i can't that talk about the things about New Year's Day'.So it's tiime for you to help me hold a party and inform everyone the time ,site and some preparations.It is up to you to decide that.At last,whether it's wonderful or not ,it decided on yourselves,and then congratulation you to succeed. LiMing 2008,12,23