题目要求:
Today,the quality of life in large cities is decreasing . What are the causes and solutions?
题目讲解:
报告类题目,难度不大,思路要点在于解决方法与原因分析的对应性。
第一段:开头
第二段:原因——环境污染,健康问题,工作压力
第三段:解决——绿色科技+绿化,健康意识+运动设施,学会自我减压
第四段:结尾
作者词汇量积累很好,高级词汇表达灵活;文章层次较为清晰;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误。
Under contemporary, the quality of life to many people is decline, that catch our attention. there are so much reasons for that phenomenon. Initially, environmental, healthy problem and the stress of work. For the terms of environmental, tremendous families possess private vehicles, it emits the gases is the major pollutant to global warming. for exmple, China's capital Beijing is suffering fog. For healthy problem, individual do not care about the quality of sleeping, they stay up and drink alcohol, that may cause lung disease and heart attack. The solution of these penomenon are below, firstly, protect our environment, through the way that take public transportation to work . Furtherly, have a regulary life, go to bed early , do not be a slave to your phone. Ultimately, when you are depressed with your work, do some to release your stress. Try to control your bad mood. To sum up , when you are suffering a bad life ,try to find a solution.