若注意一些句子错误,文章会更漂亮;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错;部分高级词汇也能熟练使用,但文中有较多拼写错误。
Nowadays,more and more people are likely to come to conclusions inadvisable judging by what they see and what they hear.Not only do We always catch the surface of the phenomenon,but also we don't pay more attention to those things.It's the fact that we are lack of thinking and just see a little of it .Most importantly,it makes negative influence of us as well as our society. From my point of view,we ought to be far away from conclusion that make up directly with what we see and what we hear.If we are accustomed to pay more attention to other's viewpoint rather than through our cosideration,we'll abandon our application and analysization of konwledge. At the same time,our brains will be lazy and advoid thinking .Worsely people of our society will bring a bad influence .It's undouble that our society will stay in a step and stop going. It's my sugggestion that we must find out the fact of the things .Consulting all kinds of people's view,we should analysize what makes it to be that . Finally we can easily cosider various of factor and then drown up conclusion. We'd better to do someting and thing of it before you say about it.
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