句式变化较为明显,句法基础不错;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错;作者词汇基础挺好,能灵活使用部分高级词汇,但词汇拼写要再接再厉。
Nowadays,more and more person are likely to come to conclusions inadvisable judging by what they see and what they hear.Not only do We always catch the surface of the phenomenon,but also we don't pay more attention to those things.It's the fact that we are lack of thinking and just see a little of it .Most importantly,it makes negative influence of us as well as our society. From my point of view,we ought to be far away from conclusion that make up directly with what we see and what we hear.If we are accustomed to pay more attention to other's viewpoint rather than through our consideration,we'll abandon our application and analysis of konwledge. At the same time,our brains will be lazy and avoid thinking.Worsely people of our society will bring a bad influence.It's undouble that our society will stay in a step and stop going. It's my suggestion that we must find out the fact of the things.Consulting all kinds of people's view,we should analysize what makes it to be that. Finally we can easily consider various of factor and then drown up conclusion. We'd better to do someting and think of it before you say about it.
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