文章在句法方面做的很棒,从句和复杂句的使用不错;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错;文章词汇丰富度较好,一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活。
Nowadays,more and more people are likely to come to conclusions inadvisable judging by what they see and what they listen.Not only do We always catch the surface of the phenomenon,but also we don't pay more attention to those things.It's the fact that we are lack of thinking and just see a little of it .Most importantly,it makes negative influence of us as well as our society. From my point of view,we ought to be far away from conclusion that make up directly with what we see and what we listen.If we are accustomed to pay more attention to other's viewpoint rather than through our consideration,we'll abandon our application and analysis of konwledge. At the same time,our brains will be lazy and avoid thinking.Worsely people of our society will bring a bad influence.It's undouble that our society will stay in a step and stop going. It's my suggestion that we must find out the fact of the things.Consulting all kinds of people's view,we should analysize what makes it to be that. Finally we can easily consider various of factor and then drown up conclusion. We'd better to do something and think of it before you say about it.
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