托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第48篇:是否是只有你赢得了比赛才说明参与运动是有价值的

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Sports, as one of the most important parts in our life, would leave us with enjoyable times, help us to built our healthy body and provide alternative method to communicate or make friends with others. In my point of view, for common people, it is important to perspirate in competing sports rather than wining; but for athletes, especially famous international athletes, to win is their only reason why they participating in sports. Take badminton for example, most of us, try to exercise through this certain kind of sports. It's importance is no more than basketball, baseball or other sports. Through playing badminton, one can improve his agility, adjust his blood circulation, lose his weight and relax his working pressure. Everyone involved in this sport is definetely want to win, because badminton is a competing sport. But if you lose or if you win nothing do not means it is just a way of wasting time. It certainly helps you in various ways. But for first-rate athletes who treat badminton as career, he must consider wining as his only goal. Eight to twelve hours' training everyday, there are nothing pleasure left to participate in this sports except wining in some world-class games. If he lose, unfortunately, it means he will have much pressure from everyside of his life. So, it is complex to determine whether participating in sports is worthwhile when you win nothing. As the development of commercialization in sports, sporting spirits has already disappeared. To win is the only goal for first-class athletes. But for common people like us sports is just a way to keep health, win or lose if not as important as enjoying or other sporting elements.