托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第48篇:是否是只有你赢得了比赛才说明参与运动是有价值的

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Sports, as one of the most important parts in our life, would leave us with pleasure, help us to build our healthy body and provide alternative method to communicate or make friends with others. In my point of view, for ordinary people, it is important to perspirate in sports rather than wining; but for athletes, especially famous international athletes, to win is their only reason why they participating in sports. Take badminton for example, most of us try to exercise through it. In our thinking, it is no more important than basketball, baseball or other sports. Through playing badminton, one can improve his agility, ameliorate his blood circulation, lose his weight and relax his pressure. Everyone involved in this sport definitely want to win because badminton is a competing sport. But if you lose or if you win nothing does not mean it is just wasting of time. It certainly helps you in various ways. But for first-rate athletes who treat badminton as his career, he must consider wining as his only goal. Eight to twelve hours' training everyday, there are no pleasure to participate in this sport except wining in world-class games. If he lose, unfortunately, it means he will have much pressure maintain his usual life. So, it is complex to determine whether participating in sports is worthwhile when you win nothing. With the development of commercialization in sports, sporting spirits have already disappeared. To win is the only goal for first-class athletes. But for ordinary people like us sport is just a way to keep health, win or lose is not as important as the pleasure it gives us.