2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

拼写做的很棒，在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累；过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错；若增加一些从句的使用，文章会取得更好的成绩。

As the development of Internet,online shopping has becoming more and more popular .It is definitely that online shopping will substitute for the traditional shopping ways. In spite of lots of merits of online shopping ,there are also many shortcomings.Firstly,people are easier been cheated in such a virtual environment,especially for the old and the children.Secondly ,because we can't touch or try on the things we want to buy,so it is difficult to guarantee what we bought is fit on us.And thirdly,it will take few days before we receive the thing we want for they may be sent from a faraway place. In my opinion,the advantages of online shopping overweight its shortcomings.Everyone should have some knowledge about it at least.