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My hometown is a small village,thus there are many beautiful and famous places, the fresh air,fantastic paper cutting,and hige mountains,attracting many tourists to here.What is the most interesting place is the temple in the Sambu mountain,which had a long history in my hometown. It is said that the temple was built for appreciating the monk named Zhiyin,who saved many people in povery,and lead bad men to the right way. We often worship him in the festivals and holidays. The reason why I have to suggested you to here is that the prediction of the host is very accurate,you may amazing at the outcome,because what they said is right.What is more, you can ask the solutions to the propblems that troubles you, the host will happy to help you and give you some advice.
