语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;熟练使用了一些长难句;文章词汇表达比较丰富,但高级词汇稍显欠缺,此外拼写检查要重视。
Nowadays, it is not a uncommon that we can see the advertisements about blind date. For the most of younth, we have to join in various type of blind date as our parents always hope that we can have a boyfriend or girlfriend and then marry as soon as possible. As the pace of life is faster and faster many youngth must face various pressure from society, for that reason, a great deal of youngths is no time to make new friends and take part in social activities. Therefore, some people suppose the youngth join in the blind date because they can find the partner in their life as soon as possible. But the other people hold the opposite view that we should spend many time in joining in the blind date. because they think that blind date can not find the true love.