语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者词汇表达较为熟练,高级词汇使用不是很多;熟练使用了一些长难句。
Nowadays, it is not a uncommon that we can see the blind advertising. For the most of youth, we have to go for all kinds of blind date as our parents always hope that we can have a boyfriend or girlfriend and then marry as soon as possible. As the pace of life is faster and faster many youths must face various pressure from society, for that reason, a great deal of youths is no time to make new friends and go for social activities. Therefore, some people suppose the youths go for the blind date because they can find the partner in their life as soon as possible. But the other people hold the opposite view that we should take many time to go for the blind date. because they think that blind date can not find the true love.