作者高级词汇使用比较准确,文中有较多拼写错误;不能熟练使用过渡词,基本没有衔接词;句法知识不错,多多加强复杂句的练习。
1.the Euro Crisis confront severe sovereign or government debt problem.Spin and I taly are also in trouble and face mounting debt burdens,mainly private debt.in fact the main sovereign debt crisis mainly stemmed from Greece,s public debt problem. it is about too much debt and vulnerable banks. the heavy exposure by some banks to a bursting property bubble saw a banking collapse. the greek state is a relatively weak state that has long suffered from corruption,poor administration,over spending and weak tax collection. greeek or otherr peripheral economy debt would now under the control of the inflation because monertary management was now under the control of the inflation averse ecb. these debt crisis in the countries have become major problems. inter contradictions and economic imbalancesif the imbalances and unsupportable debt levels that had built up in the likes of greece,as essential economic problems. the technocratic ,unaccountable ecb has emerged as a critical part of the crisis repose. 2.hall,s paper is very good on these national variations and imbalances within europe as a key source of problems. is the eu going to develop even deeper forms of political and economic integration and the new institutions this implies,or will a structurally-driven disintegrative momentum take hold threating the very foundations and identity of the eurozone