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I think the key problems drove the Euro crisis are severe sovereign or government too much debt crisis finance system, the fledgling bond markets and fragile banking system which a bursting property bubble saw a banking collapse, especially some countries have many debt burdens, mainly private debt. It is fact that some countries sustain political corruption, mismanagement , excess consumption and illogicality adjustment of tax. Under the control of the inflation effects also some countries have peripheral economy debt. In addition, inter contradictions , economic imbalances and unsupportable debt levels are also drive the Euro crisis arose. Besides, fiscal fecklessness, the technocratic ,unaccountable ecb, Political reasonableness are not suitable also emerged about government make crisis repose.It is not adequate that the crude limits placed on debt and deficits of the SGP. The root cause of all the trend crisis about in a failure of political will, it means some agencies carry out some right policies bring good result and crisis can not happen. The fiscal imprudence of the southern Europeans and the crisis of confidence is also bad effect for the Euro crisis.