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小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:36浏览次数:36989
要求:
用英文描述下自己的好朋友。
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My good friend My good friend named JiangNan. She is taller than me and she has a long straight hair. she has a round face and big eyes. She likes wearing dresses because she has beautiful long legs and good fit. She likes to sing songs , I think she was born for singing, when we go to sing songs she always hold mic nobody can get it from her, but we all enjoy her songs indeed. Oh, now she went to her hometown, I miss her so much, I hope you can come back soon.

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