正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;建议在衔接词汇方面加强积累。
Tina is my best friend. She comes from Hongkong. She is very nice. She is good at singing and dancing. She is tall. Her eyes are black. She likes swimming and chess. She goes to school on foot everyday. She is a student. Everyone likes her very much. I love her.