小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend. Her name is Tina. She is a very beautiful girl. She has long black hair, two big black eyes and a red mouth. She is good at singing and dancing. Her voice is very nice. She likes playing computer games and chess. She is also nice. She always help us. Our classmates all like her very much.