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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17602
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分68.0分
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文章结构清晰,有效地采用了多种衔接方法;作者在句法层面做的很棒;文章词汇表达比较灵活,学术词汇的使用要继续加强;请注意分段。

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My brother Jimmy met with difficult delivery when he was born so his brain was damaged out of lack of oxygen. Since then the life of our whole family centered on him. My mother took care of his practical life, such as taught him how to brush his teeth, deal with the shoe-lace and so on. My father,with whom Jimmy was almost inseparable, was in charge of his other side of life, driving him to work on every workday, usually walking and talking with him after supper. And I was responsible for the outside where I would track down to the parents of the kids who picked on him and tell them on.

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