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Nowadays,many products have an good impression due to it's unique packaging.but if the products is really wonderful as the photos on the packaging. On excessive packaging is a general phenomenon. In my opinion, this phenomenon result from many reason.firstly excessive packging is attracts many consumer's view,they usually make an conversation about a production while with a new style packaging.such as the jiaduobao fistly push out the golden packinging,is a good way about promotion. secondly excessive packaging is go through a design procedure,is add to the production a viewing value.Lastly but no least,customer usually choose a excessive packaing production as a gift to send others, because the level of packaging standard a serious attitude and improve the value of production As far as I am concerned excessive packaging is an unsal society phenomenon If customer thank is neccessary and they willing spent much money on these goods,it's not a large problem.But I think the splendid pakaging should be sure the production is great.
