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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33639
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分80.5分
评语:

可适当增加文中长句和复杂句的使用;拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

Be a Smart Consumer As a student, we don't have a stable job so that we have no ability to support ourselves. Most of the time, we obtain money from our parents or our relatives. Therefore, being a smart consumer is of great significance to improve the efficiency of our money. Being a smart consumer means using our money properly. When it comes to the importance of using money properly, I will take my own experience as an example. Once after I spent 600 yuan taking a trip, I had no money left to have meals so I borrowed some money from my classmate. Two weeks later, I still didn't have money to give back to my classmate but she asked me to do that. At that time, I realized that using money too much was a suffer for myself. I felt embarrassed when my classmate reminded me to return money to her because I didn't have any money. From this experience, I have learnt a lesson that I am supposed to use money properly and take down how much money I have and how much I have spent. Only in this way, can I know how much money I should spend. In conclusion, we should never buy something unnecessary but buy something we really need. Managing our money is the foundamental step to be a smart consumer.

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