单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。
I have a good friend who is my classmate.She has a seat next to me. She has long hair and brown eyes. She is taller than me and she is pretty beautiful.She like dressing colorful clothes.She also is a good student and study very hard. Everyone likes her in our class.