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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17596
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分71.5分
评语:

拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;文章衔接手法恰当;文中应增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩。

用户练习作文:

I definitely agree with snap judgments can never be trusted.As we all know, seeing is believing, but in real life, seeing sometimes is not believing that seems to be a snap judgment.Sometimes in life, we will encounter kinds of problems.Some we can use our eyes to judgment, some we can not. For instance, when we are driving on the road,due to careless we hit somebody.We must get off the car and to check that person whether hurt or not. At the first judgment, that person maybe is fine.We can not find that person was hurt. So, we just take it for granted think that person is ok, we don't need to take her to hospital. Actually,we will make a wrong decision.It is basic on your first judgment,we must take her to hospital to do further check.It is prove that snap judgments can never be trusted, if we trust it, we will make a mistake that never can not remedy.

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