【题目要求】
A person you know is planning to move to your town or city. What do you think this person would like and dislike about living in your town or city? Why? Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.
【题目分析】
这是一个讨论假设问题的题目。尽量展开想象。注意:不要只说my city,要指出你所在城市的名字, 比如:Beijing, Shanghai等等。人们会喜欢的有:女人喜欢商场;男人可能喜欢书店;大的公园、动物园;名胜古迹;文化氛围;人们会讨厌的有:交通堵塞;空气不新鲜;大城市的排外主义(exclusivism)、不友善(unfriendly);采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;文中单词拼写做的很棒,再多积累些词汇就更好了;句式变化较为明显,句法基础不错。
If my friend Joice wants to live in Peaking,I think that is a wonderful idea.Even if the weather in Peaking is not good as in Shanghai and the traffic is bad,but in Peaking, she can enjoy shopping. There have a large number of malls in Peaking, she could purchase anything that she wants.Also,there have many enthusiasm places for her to play.If she likes reading, there are lots of bookstores that she can visit.