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【题目要求】
A person you know is planning to move to your town or city. What do you think this person would like and dislike about living in your town or city? Why? Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.
【题目分析】
这是一个讨论假设问题的题目。尽量展开想象。注意：不要只说my city，要指出你所在城市的名字， 比如：Beijing, Shanghai等等。人们会喜欢的有：女人喜欢商场;男人可能喜欢书店;大的公园、动物园;名胜古迹;文化氛围；人们会讨厌的有：交通堵塞;空气不新鲜;大城市的排外主义(exclusivism)、不友善(unfriendly);语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用高级词汇就更好了；文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用。
If my friend Joice wants to live in Peking,I think that is a wonderful idea. Even if the weather in Peking is not good as in Hainan and the traffic is bad, but in Peking, she can enjoy shopping. There are a large number of shopping malls in Peking, she could purchase anything that she wants. Also, there are many recreation places for her to play. If she likes reading, there are lots of bookstores that she can visit. In Beijing, there also have plenty resorts such as The Forbidden City and Summer Palace, which she can take pictures for memory. On the other hand, there also have serval things that people dislikes. The air in Beijing is not fresh,people can not inhale fresh air. That why people live in Beijing cause a serious lung disease. As all we know, big cities have exclusivism phenomenon,they don't want aliens to come in, they don't like talking with people who come from other cities.They will make an unfriendly action to people who are from other places. In conclusion,in order to improve her English level, I really want Joice to come to Beijing.Because there have enough resources for her to learn English.
