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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17602
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分57.0分
评语:

熟练的使用了从句和复杂句;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词;作者能较熟练地使用丰富的词汇,但请加强单词拼写的检查。

用户练习作文:

I do aggree with that snap judgments can never be trusted. First of all, snap judgments comes out so quickly that one can hardly got it pricisly, it more likely you put a model on the person in front of you than you understand him and creat a new one instead, your snap judgments are the stereostypes in your mind, but not the stranger you met. Secondly, snap judgments are more likely made only by first looking, considering some daily behiviors at most, which are really superfacial. Think about the earth, we human are discoving the inner constructure since we can, recognise it's not enough to knew the shallow ground only, and I believe everyone got the 'I consider ..., while...' time, for me, that is I consider my director serious, while she is really kindhearted. So do not cheated by your eyes, and take time to get along with the one you want to know, than the reasonable judgement would be got.

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