作者应在平时练习中加强复杂句的练习;文中单词拼写做的不错,另外再增加词汇量积累就更好了;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构不严谨。
I am so glad to receive your letter. You want to know what I like to do after the exam. Now let me tell you about it.I am so happy.I want to play with you ,but you are not staying at home.I want to play basketball with my father,but my father don't any free time.So I deside to play football.I feel happy very much. Bye.I hope you have a good holiday. Yours David
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