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THE MOST INTERESTING PLACE I am very happy to hear from your letter,there are kinds of interests in my hometown . I hope that you can like there,which maybe attract you everywhere. Now,it is high time that something was done about it .For example ,lu xun,who is a famous writer in China .In additon,shaoxing is his hometown.there are many things of his is remained.At present ,it attracts many people from everywhere in China .as qiujing's house,zhouenglai's house and so on.well ,the quiet life of the country will appeale to you,there is famous with meigancai,furu,wuzhanmao and so on .I believe that you will like to try it. In a word ,I am sure you will have fun.Look forward to seeing you soon in my hometown.