高一英语作文模拟题:向游客介绍南京

句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用高级词汇就更好了；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅。

I'm your guide and i'm quite glad to introduce Nanjing for you.Now let me tell you something on Nanjing.Nanjing is the capital of Jiangsu Provience,which is located in the southeast of China and the population of it approximately five million.What's more,Nanjing is a historical city as well with 2,400 year-long history.Once upon a time,there were 10 dynasties regarded it as capital.It's Nanjing very beautiful that there are a lot of places of interests,such as Xuanwu Lake,the Jjming Temple,the Stone City and so on.It also has a large number of modern factory and tall buildings.How beautiful it is!