作者词汇量偏小,另外文章有些单词拼写错误;文章层次较为清晰;部分句子偏简单,注意有错误的句子。
woke up in the end, and it was a dream. I woke up in the end, and it was a dream.we went towonderland,and we played very happy.we could seeing all kinds of flowers,and they could saying.many animals flew very happy in the sky.I tried many times flying,but I failed.Alice gave you a special coat,you could flying very tall when you wore the coat.Suddenly,I droped it because of my careless.At last,I woke from the dream.I found that it was a dream.