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I woke up in the end, and it was a dream. I woke up in the end, and it was a dream.we went towonderland,and we played very happy.we could see all kinds of flowers,and they could say .many animals flew very happy in the sky.I tried many times flying,but I failed.Alice gave you a special coat,you could flying very tall when you wore the coat.Suddenly,I droped it because of my careless.At last,I woke from the dream.I found that it was a dream.