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I will go to courage in the near furture . I have to make a new plan for my university. First, I am going to improve my way to study. Then, I must live by myself. What's more, in order to inrich my life, I am supposed to taking part in many colorful activities. Finaily, I should get the hung of my classmates. It's very important for me to make good use of my time. In my opinion, my courages life must be so beauteful.
