小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；句子错误偏多，建议修改；文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

my new teacher,my new teacher is a handsome boy,he was a tall and well-built,he has got a short hair,and dark eyes,he taught us English,he's pronunciation is better,he always tell us new things,when we have he's class,we are very happy,cause he's so funny,he always teach us speak English more,don't be shy,practice makes perfect,and never give up.