复杂句采用很棒;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;文中词汇表达较为丰富准确,但存在单词拼写错误。
I love my hometown all the time, but i am sad that the howntown has a lager chance in recent years, now everywhere all are tall building, factory, stores. sorts of cars always come and go in the street; the environment has been bad due to the factory's development; the trees also were reduced, the fishes are disapearing in the river. i miss our passed howntown, at that time, the water is very clear, and the fishes is swimming lively; the houses also are rarely, the street is narrow.