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文中词汇较灵活，但要注意积累高级词汇，拼写错误也要注意；使用了简单的从句；不能熟练使用过渡词，文章结构欠佳。
Dear Sigmund, My name is Liu Hong. I’m a Grade 9 student in No 2 Middle school. Hello,Mr Sigmund.My name is Liu Hong,my best liking color are yellow and blue.My parents are strict with me,almost not have any time for playing.I am very boring for studying,so I like cosplay.But my parents not allowed to like cosplay.And I like playing soccer and basketball,but I always can't play with soccer.Sometimes my homework can't finish,more study grades more worse.Teacher and parents give me heavy study pleasure,I worry about studying I hope to hear from you soon. Best wishes! yours Liu Hong
