雅思写作范文:出国旅游的利弊

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l think travelling overseas is a popular choice nowadays . Because we can know a completely different culture and also can make many foreign friends. The scene is also different. Every country has its own unique scene. Especially the buildings, for example :many Chinese buildings are wooden and very delicate and not only the Europe'buildings are v