2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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My hometown doesn't have many significant attractions.There are just some mini sceneries in my hometown.But,during my childhood,I liked going to mountains that were very amazing and full of temples.Many people would go there to pray,so did I,because I think in this way it sometimes makes us calm down. Therefore I will take the foreign friends to climb the mountains with the flower emitting charming smell.At the top of the mountains,we can see the whole beauty of the city.Especially in the night,the sceneries will be more beautiful.And I will take them to pray for experiencing the culture of China. During that time,I also will take them to shopping,not to the supermart,but some food streets.In my hometown,there are lots of delicious food.And my hometown is also called food city.It is said that everyone who comes to my hometown will be reluctant to leave on.I think maybe you can imagine how delicious the food is and how attractive my hometown is. So if I have foreign friends ,I will take them to the above places what I mentioned.