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As we all know, healthy is very important for us.with the living standards improved,more and more people is aware of the importance of the health.but how can we keep healthy?someone believe that it is necessary to keep a balanced diet.i think that if you want a healthy body,it is not only keep a balanced diet,but also needing to do exercise every day.it will be a huge help to keep healthy. Doing exercise every day is a healthy way to keep healthy.frankly,doing exercise not only can help you keep slim,but also keep healthy.what's more,doing exercise makes you happy.it is easy to keep healthy. In a word, i trust that if we want to keep healthy,doing exercise every day is very necessary.
