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字数：300 满分：100分
行文较为流畅，作者文中过渡词使用的不错；可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，高级词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查。
As a student, learning is the task of the number one.Only routine living necessity is need in daily life.So with not many noney need to spend on as a student in schools. If you often make some coupons or taking in group-buy deals, you would comsume too much. Catching the coupon to buy something unless you take the numbers which the shopper requires.But the numbers of the goods is too much to a student,and it is usually be wasted.Sometimes we needn't the machants or tours what we cosume in groups. It take our too more money on what isn't our student's essential thing. And more time and effort to consume,then the less sparing time and effort to study. Living like this isn't exactly smart. So we can take more effort on learning and less to comsume.
